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love and hope my last request by ~fenrir1293:iconfenrir1293:

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I look at my hands
what's wrong with me
im alive yet i complain
while a life dangles in the breeze

so liflike yet they loose hope
please God as my last request
they have more to live for then me
more days together they should see

Give it to me, not to him
Give me pain, and gie them my life
take my very breath
but dont let them see death

i give you hope
i give this prayer
please know im always there
live on in your love

I cry for i complain
i wait upon my elder curse
but this is somthing you see now
and i tell you i make this vow

my friend i will do anything
weather it be just to listen to a word
or make you laugh when the day is done
even if your day is not much fun

Dear lord her me this request
dont not take his breath
fore his life is worth two
mine is only worth my own

as sunsett falls uopn our world
we all sit as one
you will be with us so dont give up hope
and our love for you will never waver
©2008-2009 ~fenrir1293
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Submitted: April 14, 2008
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THis is about somthing happening in my life, i cant say whay it is, its not my place to...sorry.
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~fenrir1293:iconfenrir1293: Apr 14, 2008, 6:38:43 PM
o i didt draw the kitty found it on google

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<(o.o)> muffins is MY demon kitty steal him and i WILL hurt you

OH MAN THE NINJA IS STEELIN MY HOT DOG!!!! :ninjaeat:

I ALWAYS take requests :typerhappy:

O sweet jeezin on a moeped!!!!
~LovestruckDemoness:iconLovestruckDemoness: Apr 14, 2008, 6:45:22 PM
This is beautiful. I would ask, but you explained enough in your description. :+fav: :)

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Look daddy, it's a butterfly...
Light up the darkness.
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~fenrir1293:iconfenrir1293: Apr 14, 2008, 6:51:03 PM
:) and i would tell, but im not alloud, i had to pry to figure it out

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<(o.o)> muffins is MY demon kitty steal him and i WILL hurt you

OH MAN THE NINJA IS STEELIN MY HOT DOG!!!! :ninjaeat:

I ALWAYS take requests :typerhappy:

O sweet jeezin on a moeped!!!!
~TheREALMufasa23:iconTheREALMufasa23: Apr 15, 2008, 5:05:57 AM
:hug: if ya need me ya know im right here =D

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~LovestruckDemoness:iconLovestruckDemoness: Apr 15, 2008, 1:59:21 PM
Which is why I said you explained enough in your description. :)

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Look daddy, it's a butterfly...
Light up the darkness.
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~fenrir1293:iconfenrir1293: Apr 15, 2008, 2:29:49 PM
:) it isnt me, but thanx mufasa :hug: ur the best

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<(o.o)> muffins is MY demon kitty steal him and i WILL hurt you

OH MAN THE NINJA IS STEELIN MY HOT DOG!!!! :ninjaeat:

I ALWAYS take requests :typerhappy:

O sweet jeezin on a moeped!!!!
~fenrir1293:iconfenrir1293: Apr 15, 2008, 2:35:31 PM
lol ^^

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<(o.o)> muffins is MY demon kitty steal him and i WILL hurt you

OH MAN THE NINJA IS STEELIN MY HOT DOG!!!! :ninjaeat:

I ALWAYS take requests :typerhappy:

O sweet jeezin on a moeped!!!!
~kougralover6268:iconkougralover6268: Apr 15, 2008, 3:09:07 PM
Wow, strong. I am impressed with this. Nice job. If yas need me, I am here for you. :hug:

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~fenrir1293:iconfenrir1293: Apr 15, 2008, 3:44:50 PM
:) i only wish it was me, :D but thanx!!!! :icongwomp:

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<(o.o)> muffins is MY demon kitty steal him and i WILL hurt you

OH MAN THE NINJA IS STEELIN MY HOT DOG!!!! :ninjaeat:

I ALWAYS take requests :typerhappy:

O sweet jeezin on a moeped!!!!
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